Template:Did you know nominations/Cello Sonata (Poulenc)
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The result was: promoted by HalfGig talk 13:51, 23 February 2017 (UTC)
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Cello Sonata (Poulenc)
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Bust of Pierre Fournier
- ... that for the composition of his Cello Sonata, Francis Poulenc who was unfamiliar with the instrument appreciated help from the cellist Pierre Fournier (bust pictured)?
- ALT1
... that because he was unfamiliar with the instrument, Francis Poulenc received help from the cellist Pierre Fournier (bust pictured) when composing his Cello Sonata?
- Reviewed: Naomi Frankel
5x expanded by LouisAlain (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 22:19, 12 January 2017 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. I have added ALT1, which has the same facts as ALT0 but is expressed differently. The image is appropriately licensed, the hook facts have inline citations, the article is neutral and I detected no policy issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:33, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review and the ALT in better English, but having the subject at the very end of a hook is not my idea ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:18, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
- Read ALT1 again, and it doesn't work, because instrument could be so many things.
- ALT2 ... that because he was unfamiliar with the cello, Francis Poulenc received help from the cellist Pierre Fournier (bust pictured) when composing his Cello Sonata? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:29, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
- ALT2 is fine. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:54, 21 February 2017 (UTC)