Talk:Zakir Husain/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 22:56, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

I'll take this nomination—I'll take up to a week to get round to it. This review will be used for Wikicup points. Please consider reviewing an article yourself—the backlog is long, and the WP:GAN list promotes nominators with a good reviewing score. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:56, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

   I have made several changes to satisfy MOS:LAYOUT. See below for issues.

2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

   C. It contains no original research:

   See #Random source spotcheck below.

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

   See #Random source spotcheck below.

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

   The images could be larger, and the stamps could be combined using {{Multiple image}}

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Couple of minor issues above and below. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:37, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

Random source spotcheck

• 18 good
• 21 good
• 44 a page number would be helpful, but good
• 46 good
• 55 AGF
• 60 good
• 106 good
• 131 AGF
• 141 good
• 145 unnecessary

Other comments

• note b) is very unnecessary (MOS:EDITORIAL)
• Try to eliminate single sentence/single line paragraphs
• I will conduct a minor copyedit before promotion. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:37, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

*Citation 145 is the source for the claim of the tomb featuring arches and jalis in it. So that's not unnecessary, is it? * Regarding note b) - the comparison made is attributed, it isn't original research, is clearly mentioned as such in the cited source and to me it appears not to use any of the words/style mentioned in the MOS. So should it still be edited out? * Have clubbed the images as suggested and made a few changes to the captions. Ashwin147 (talk) 07:22, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

Expanded the lede. There are three single line paragraphs in the article now (expanded on a fourth yesterday) but I'm at a loss on how to eliminate them. Ashwin147 (talk) 07:43, 17 May 2023 (UTC)

Ashwin147, note b) states "thus seeking to apportion blame unlike Husain who beseeched the leaders gathered to end the violence" in wikivoice, not as a statement of Vadarajan. If you wish to keep it, I would suggest removing the lengthy quote of Vajpayee's speech, and placing Varadarajan's exact words in quote marks. I've joined the single-line paragraphs. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:15, 22 May 2023 (UTC)

AirshipJungleman29 I've tweaked it now and think that should fix the concern you've flagged. Also added a few more images to the article. Ashwin147 (talk) 09:06, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

Ashwin147, as the quote from from a memorial lecture to Zakir Husain and was therefore somewhat biased right off the bat, I've edited it down to adhere it to NPOV further. I'll promote this article now. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:07, 24 May 2023 (UTC)

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