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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:32, 31 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:32, 31 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the lengthy delay.

  • No DABs, external link OK
  • Image appropriately licensed.
  • No duplicate links.
  • Link the Bofors 40mm gun directly.
    • Done.
  • I'm a bit dubious that the Beograd design was derived from the Simouns except in the broadest possible terms as the French design dated back to the 20s, was a 100 tons larger, 5 knots slower and had 3 times the bunkerage. Probably best to ignore that bit entirely as it doesn't pass the smell test, IMO.
    • I'll accept your opinion on this, although it is pretty clear in the source. I've amended it to say it was developed from a French design.
  • in single gun shield mounts Suggest "in single mounts fore and aft of the superstructure, protected by gun shields" or something similar.
    • Done.
  • Link shelter deck or nearest equivalent.
    • Not sure what that would be?
  • two triple-mount 550 mm (22 in) torpedo tubes Howabout two triple mounts for 550 mm...?
  • Your account of her actions under Italian control are pretty sparse. Did she participate in any battle with Allied surface ships, sink a sub or have any ships in her convoys sunk?
  • single mount 20 mm (0.79 in) Hyphenate single mount. Do you know the model of guns used by the Germans when they rearmed her? If so, link them.

--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:09, 12 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Where are we on this?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:11, 26 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Just need another day or so, RW got in the way of a visit to the library... Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:43, 26 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
OK Sturm, there wasn't much, but I've added what there was. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 11:35, 27 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]