Talk:Vitaliano Aguirre II
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Hi! This is Twentius. Regarding about my edit on June 6, 2019.
- From negative propaganda to a neutral article.
- Some sentences are overly accusative and imbalance which is unfair to the accused, should always treat all accusations and pending charges as "alleged".
- Separate section for controversies as the introduction is too long.
- Added more context to the controversies so it will be fairer and let the reader judge, not the writer.
- Removed Jack Lam controversy because it does not involve Aguirre himself and action of corruption by his subordinates should not be cited as his. Also, no NBI probe nor case involving him directly.
- Removed direct accusation by the writer that Peter Lim was a "government ally" even though government itself (also Pres. Duterte) ordered for his arrest and manhunt.
- About the alleged "King of Fake News" tag ad hominem and accusations, I think it does not deserve a place in Wikipedia.
- About the Mulanay "condemnation", he was not "condemned" (as it is strong term) but slammed by the mayor himself only, not the whole town, upon checking the article. Ojedas are political rival of Aguirres in the town to add context.
- Removed unnecessary hyperbole and adjectives which promotes bias (i.e. Ferocious?).
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