Talk:Transportation during the 2024 Summer Olympics and Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Arconning (talk) 12:07, 28 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 03:40, 4 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:07, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Will review in a few days. ^ Arconning (talk) 15:07, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Hawkeye7 Finished with the comments! Arconning (talk) 06:03, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Prose and MoS

Remove the spaces beside usages of the endash.
Y Removed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:27, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Writing is quite good but could include the arson attack, feel like it's a major event that should be mentioned.
Y Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:27, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Don't bold the opening statement as it contains Wikilinks.
Y Removed the links per MOS:BOLDLINK. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Background

No issues.

Preparations

Visitors to Paris , probably uncapitalized.
Y Uncapitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Security

No issues.

Accessibility

See first comment.
There were expectations 350,000 fans with disabilities would be visiting Paris., this could probably be worded better as "There were expectations that 350,000 fans with disabilities would be visiting Paris."
Y Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:27, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Île-de-France regional president, add "the" before the statement.
Y Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:27, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Public transport passes

ticket t+, capitalize.
Y Capitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
subscribers in Île-de-France, "the Île-de-France"
It is okay as it is. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Rail network

at Place de la Concorde, "at the Place..."
Y Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Cycling

notably at Place de la Concorde, "notably at the Place de la Concorde"?
Y Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:27, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Road network

at Palais des congrès de Paris., "at the Palais des congrès de Paris."
Y Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Toyota supplied organisers with a fleet of vehicles, including the Mirai fuel cell vehicle. Some 1,000 buses to transport athletes and accredited personnel., both of these sentences don't grammatically make sense.
Y Re-worded both sentences. Fun fact: non-Toyota vehicles had their badges taped over. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

River network

All good.

Airports

See first comment.
Y Spaced ndashes have been removed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Disruption

All good.

Media

All media used in the article have proper licensing, images, captions, and are relevant to the article.

Refs

Earwig's alright.
Ref checks: 8, 27, 35, 44, 51, 62. All good. 72 needs to be fixed.
Y Curse link rot! And the useless Internet Archive. Added an archive.today link. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:53, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Misc

No ongoing edit war, neutral, broad information around the topic.

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