Talk:Tom Clancy's Splinter Cell: Blacklist/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:37, 8 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will take a look at this soon JAGUAR 13:37, 8 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

"It is the first title developed by Ubisoft Toronto, a studio founded by Ubisoft in 2009" - first title in the series or their first game ever?
"with praise for its level design, story, and multiplayer mode and criticism of dated graphics" - this sentence needs a break. Perhaps something like with praise for its level design, story, and multiplayer mode. However, criticism was directed at its dated graphics or something similar like that
"The "Spies vs. Mercs" competitive mode introduced in Splinter Cell: Pandora Tomorrow" - should this be written out as just Pandora Tomorrow? It was done so in the lead
"In 2010, the series' fifth installment, Tom Clancy's Splinter Cell: Conviction" - again, this was abbreviated as Conviction earlier in the article. Not a big deal though
"On August 3 Ubisoft confirmed that the game" - comma in between "Ubisoft" and "confirmed"
Ref 58 redirects to GamesRadar

Once all of the above are addressed, this can be easily promoted. JAGUAR 18:40, 8 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar: Thanks for the review! I have addressed most of the issues you raised above. Blacklist is both their first game and their first Splinter Cell game, so I did not change that. Thank you once again! AdrianGamer (talk) 02:59, 9 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for clarifying them! Promoted, nice work

JAGUAR 12:47, 9 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]