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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Tocorpuri/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 21:19, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    For the most part, the article is quite well written. Nice work! The technical language used seems necessary and appropriate for the subject matter, rather than excessive jargon.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
    "Its peak height is most commonly given as 5,808 metres (19,055 ft)" — to avoid WP:OR, a secondary source explicitly stating that this figure is most common is needed. See WP:RS/AC
    Earwig check was clean
    "Occasionally, the summit area is covered with snow" This is not supported by the source, which says nothing about how often snow occurs. The most you could say is that it was once imaged with snow on it, but that seems rather trivial.
    That can't be done - we don't have secondary sources on elevation, really; Lucchi 2009 is the most recent one and is about field work so probably the most reliable for WP:RS purposes. I've put "recent" instead of "common". Regarding the snow thing ... I dunno. Many of these mountains are ice-free due to the dry climate so it's a bit more notable than otherwise, but we only have that source as confirmation. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 14:20, 18 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't doubt that the ice thing is true (you're the expert) but it's not directly stated by the source, so I have to conclude that it is OR. (t · c) buidhe 18:36, 18 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
Other comments

(t · c) buidhe 21:47, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Buidhe: Anything else missing? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:03, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
As stated above, I don't doubt that the ice thing is true (you're the expert) but it's not directly stated by the source, so I have to conclude that it is OR. (t · c) buidhe 17:04, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Buidhe: Changed it to remove the "occasional". That there are reports of snow cover is unquestionable, but not the timing. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:10, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]