Talk:Thailand at the 2014 Winter Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 16:43, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 16:43, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

• "competing in alpine skiing." Add that both are competing.

• Done. Courcelles (talk) 23:47, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

• "Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada." Could be shortened to just "Vancouver."

• Nope, sorry. MOS:CANPLACE is the dumbest rule ever, but it is a rule. Courcelles (talk) 23:47, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

• "Thailand first joined Olympic competition at the 1952 Summer Olympics in Helsinki, and excepting the boycotted 1980 Summer Olympics they have participated in every Summer Olympics since." Rephrase to "Thailand first joined Olympic competition at the 1952 Summer Olympics in Helsinki and have participated in every Summer Olympics since, except the boycotted 1980 Summer Olympics."

• Done. Courcelles (talk) 23:47, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

• "Thailand had two male athletes that met the standard, and chose to send the one that was born in Thailand and had qualified for more events." Who was the other one?

• I didn't write that sentence, and Google Translate can't read Thai well enough to give me a name, just confirm the information is accurate. Courcelles (talk) 23:47, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

• "of the slalom race. [13]" Remove space after sentence.
  • Done. Courcelles (talk)
• "but the Court of Arbitration for Sport (CAS) overturned the finding of the FIS." Why?

• Added a direct quote. Basically, she didn't do anything, people around her did. Courcelles (talk) 23:47, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

Short interesting article. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:32, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

• replied to everything above. Courcelles (talk) 23:47, 31 July 2018 (UTC)