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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Terbium compounds/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: InterstellarGamer12321 (talk · contribs) 09:55, 29 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written:
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable:
    a (reference section):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage:
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy:
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable:
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate:
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Hello, I am going to review this article. It looks good so far, but work will need to be done to get it to GA-Standard. It is Mid-importance to WikiProjects involved, so I may be picky. I will be comparing it to the GA Berkelium compounds to get a guideline of what a GA-Class compound article should look like. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk) 09:55, 29 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Feel free to message me on my talk page with any concerns related to the GA Review. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk) 17:52, 30 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Note: I have also nominated Europium compounds. 141Pr 12:48, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Initial Comments

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Since these initial comments all require a decent amount of work, I am not going to putting more comments for some time. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk) 16:22, 30 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Template:Terbium compounds only has the oxidation states of terbium in the compound, not giving specific information like space group, lattice parameters .etc. I will make a draft here ASAP. 141Pr 10:48, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I cannot access all the references needed, so I might require some assistance. 141Pr 20:34, 4 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Which references can you not access? InterstellarGamer12321 (talk) 18:29, 5 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I can't find any references on any of the grid spaces. 141Pr 08:53, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Check the individual articles to see whether you can fill blank spaces. Even if you cannot access the full references, you can still check their abstracts and get information that way. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk) 09:26, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The information I have added is mostly based on the individual articles about them. 141Pr 09:37, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Not all of these need to be filled. However, I think the color, space group and density columns should be filled as much as possible InterstellarGamer12321 (talk) 17:34, 14 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done, added table onto terbium compounds. 141Pr 10:35, 17 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done (although it is quite short and I'll add some more later) 141Pr 20:29, 4 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I have already started about pnictides in my userpage here. And the acetate doesn't really stand out. 141Pr 10:48, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I have done the acetate but still working on the pnictides. Will do rest later. 141Pr 14:23, 5 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Keep adding more referenced detail on each compound while not being too lengthy, and make the information consistent between compounds. I have emboldened this because it is currently the main issue. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk) 18:33, 5 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

More Comments

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Final comments

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I am going to pass the article now. Well done! InterstellarGamer12321 (talk) 18:36, 29 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk02:19, 5 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Improved to Good Article status by Praseodymium-141 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:47, 29 October 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: Good article! Will have to AGF due to offline and foreign language sources. Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:17, 29 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Poor article

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How can this be a good article? It contains quite a bit of poor English. So much so that that it leads to factual errors. In the table of compounds there are unit cell parameters for a b and c, but some are in nm and mostly they are in Å. So this needs to be made uniform. For monoclinic and triclinic you also need some angles for the unit cell, β; or α β γ; so these should be added also, even if it makes the table less tidy.