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This page seems to exist to praise Spaak; its language is far from objective. --Hyperbole 07:44, 30 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

So you have to say concretly, what terby will be your problem, meinwhlie pov-button will be moved. Dasebu (talk) 16:58, 11 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with User:Hyperbole. When I read this, I thought, "hagiography". There's no need to exaggerate; the real story is dramatic (and impressive) enough. Concretely, it's full of terms like "worked doggedly" or "At enormous risk to herself and her family," that don't meet Wikipedia style. See WP:PEACOCK. Adjectives, adverbs and platitudes should be deleted. The long reference to Yad Vashem doesn't belong in the Summary; there are other important things in the body that should be summarized. She also worked with Catholics and Protestants. Compare this to the French version http://fr.wiki.x.io/wiki/Suzanne_Spaak Is her portrait by Magritte in public domain? --Nbauman (talk) 22:01, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many errors

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Please see my book, Suzanne's Children, for corrected footnoted information on Suzanne Speak and her resistance activities. I'm happy to answer any queries. an115@columbia.edu 74.64.115.213 (talk) 08:35, 31 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]