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Formatting and other edits

I have cleaned up this article for a second time to bring it more in line with the Wikipedia:Manual of Style, including:

fixing the capitalization of headings per WP:HEAD
removing unwarranted boldfacing per WP:BOLDFACE
avoiding using U.S. postal abbreviations for state names that may be unfamiliar to non-Americans
removing use of honorific "Dr." after the first use -- Wikipedia does not repeat the honorifics
more formal use of language appropriate for an encyclopedia - "election campaign" instead of "race", "funding" instead of "dollars"

Having made these edits twice, I will feel free to revert future edits that violate these elements of the Manual of Style. Ground Zero | t 11:38, 19 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]