Talk:Soma Bringer
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main characters
[edit]In this game Welt(Velt) and Idea are the essencial main characters. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.183.91.29 (talk) 08:00, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Soma Bringer/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: JDC808 (talk · contribs) 17:17, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
- Lead
First para:
- Link "dungeon", "real-time combat" (not sure of the correct link for that), and "top-down perspective". "three-dimensional" and "Multiplayer" could also be linked.
Second para:
- role-playing game can be linked.
- Spell out "co-op" and link it (in parenthesis, you could put "co-op" and use that shorthand from thereafter).
- Gameplay
- Anything that I said to link above that isn't already linked here, link them here as well.
First para:
- single player -> single-player (and make sure any other instance of "single player" includes the dash).
- the players control -> the player controls
Second para:
- "...are mapped to the DS face buttons." Spell out Nintendo DS, link it, and make it possessive.
Third para:
- respawn - > respawns
- Link buffs and debuffs
- Synopsis
- "At some point prior to the game's opening, mysterious monsters called Visitors being appearing..." I believe that is supposed to be "began appearing"?
- Development
- Since I said to link Nintendo DS above in Gameplay, unlink it here.
These are what I saw on the first read through. Also did some minor copy/editing. After you've addressed these, I'll have a second read through. --JDC808 ♫ 18:18, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
- @JDC808: I've addressed the issues you raised above. --ProtoDrake (talk) 18:31, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
Verdict
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Nice article. --JDC808 ♫ 18:50, 4 January 2017 (UTC)