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POV and style issues

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I've cleaned up some vague or redundant phrasing as well as some POV issues in the lead the "Background" section ([1]), but it became clear to me that the problems may be more than superficial. Much of that section read a little like a patriotic polemic in defense of Egypt(ians) against the "Armenians" who keep "stabbing in the back", and I'm skeptical about the accuracy of some of the statements as a result. If helpful, please see also my more detailed comments on the article creator's user talk page ([2], [3]). Unfortunately I don't have time to keep reviewing this article, but another pair of eyes across the entire article would certainly help. R Prazeres (talk) 21:55, 24 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

18Carlox32, please explain this edit, especially since I explained this to you on your talk page already ([4]) and you removed a maintenance template without fixing the issue.
And in case it wasn't obvious, do not remove someone else's comment on a talk page, as you did here. See talk page guidelines. R Prazeres (talk) 23:32, 25 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Since you've continued editing the article ([5]) but haven't replied with an explanation here, I'm reverting your non-constructive edit. R Prazeres (talk) 17:29, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]