Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013

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Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
February 4, 2021	Good article nominee	Listed
May 4, 2021	Good topic candidate	Promoted

Current status: Good article

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 15:59, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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There is no bias towards you despite this review coming directly after my previous one; it is because they are so many Eurovision contest nominees! --K. Peake 15:59, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
"at the annual event." → "in the contest."
Target to Eurovision Song Contest 2012 should be on "2012 contest" text instead
Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2013#Final
"This marked their best" → "However, this marked the nation's best"

Background

Remove nation's broadcaster introduction, as you have already provided that in the lead
"for the grand final." → "for the respective grand finals."
"at the contest was" → "in the contest was"

Before Eurovision

Internal selection

Target SMRTV to San Marino RTV on the img text
"and the song" → "with the song"
Target final to Eurovision Song Contest 2012#Grand final
Target first semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2012#Semi-final_1
"as an Italian pop ballad with hints of dance" → "as a ballad with hints of dance" with the targets, as that is what the source actually says
"in the Summer of 2012" → "in August 2012" because that is directly stated by the source
"Unlike her previous year's entry," → "Unlike Monetta's entry for the previous year,"
"until 15 March" → "until 15 March 2013"
"watched online on" → "be watched online on" but the SMRTV and evening parts do not appear to be sourced
"in discussing their thoughts" → "to discuss her thoughts"
"Roberto Moretti, and the writers" → "Roberto Moretti and the writers"
"of "Crisalide (Vola)" was" → "for "Crisalide (Vola)" was"
"staged a promotion tour," → "staged a promotional tour,"
Melkweg is not mentioned as a club by any of the sources
- In the source it says "La location è la consueta Melkweg di Amsterdam" Grk1011 (talk) 18:26, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Later that month on 21 April," → "Nine days later,"
[17][16] should be put in numerical order

At Eurovision

Wikilink chrysalis on the img text per MOS:LINK2SECT
Remove wikilink on Sweden
Remove "at the time", as those rules are still the same now
Mention the draw was in Malmö
"into one of the two semi-finals," → "into one of the two semi-finals and which half of the show they would perform in,"
"of the event" → "of the contest"
[23] should be solely at the end of the para, as it backs up the last two sentences
"On 28 March," → "On 28 March 2013,"
"where she was seen" → "with her being seen"
Wikilink chrysalis

Voting

"At the second semi-final," → "In the second semi-final,"
"This also marked" → "The placement marked" plus swap this with the previous sentence in the order
"consisting of Massimiliano Messieri," → "consisting of Messieri,"
"announcing the country's" → "who announced the country's"

Points awarded to San Marino

Good

Points awarded by San Marino

Good

References

Copyvio score looks amazing again at 7.4!!
~~Archive all of these by using the tool~~ Top job on archiving so quick for this one after the comments on my previous review!
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 8 and 13
eurofestivalnews.com → Eurofestival News on ref 27, citing as publisher instead
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 28 and add (EBU) in brackets for European Broadcasting Union, removing the wikilink also

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed, quite a nice article again! --K. Peake 17:30, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Done, with one comment noted above. Grk1011 (talk) 18:39, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 Must have been an issue with google translate there, but don't you still need to cite the parts about streaming online with SMRTV? --K. Peake 18:43, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

In the cited source it lists viewing options at the bottom, including the following: "Streaming via web sul sito ufficiale smtvsanmarino.sm". Grk1011 (talk) 18:46, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 Oh sorry, I must have missed that. ✓ Pass after all of my queries have been resolved! --K. Peake 18:51, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

No worries, I don't know Italian either so I'm also relying on translated pages! Grk1011 (talk) 18:52, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Let's hope your translator is fully accurate then, if not I'm sure someone more familiar with the language will correct the text eventually! --K. Peake 07:15, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]