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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:34, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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addressed all issues in this section. Newtack101 (talk) 19:34, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

2.

  • ""spelling books, silk, hats, silver, and even tailor-made suits,"" This is phrased as a quote but isn't the exact quote
  • For the ref concerning the quote above, it's better to link to the exact document [1] than the page you have to navigate through to get to the article.
  • "October 10, 1774, The Battle of Point Pleasant was fought between the Virginia militia and Indians from the Shawnee and Mingo tribes along the Ohio River, with the militia emerging victorious." - Citation needed
  • "The months following the Dunmore's War saw tension rise between the British and the colonies. Lord Dunmore dissolved the House of Burgesses in May 1774. This lead the Burgesses to form the extralegal Virginia Convention." - Citation needed
  • "Mathews was elected to the Virginia State Senate for the inaugural session of the Virginia General Assembly, the successor to the House of Burgesses. He represented Augusta, Rockingham, Rockbridge, Shenandoah, and Pendleton counties.[21]" - This gives the impression that he represented all of these countries during that first session, but he didn't represent Pendleton until 1790, which was 10 years removed from the rest of his terms.
  • " Arnold evacuated Portsmouth by sea.[citation needed]" - Citation needed
  • "#Grigsby 1890(2), p. 88" - The hashtag appears in front of a lot of the Grigsby reference, I don't believe it should be there.
  • " Clem, Gladys B. (1965)"It Happened Around Staunton in Virginia"(Staunton, Virginia: Second Edition) p. 21-23" - Is there a way to insert a space between (1965) and "It Happened ..." ?
  • The page ranges should have endashes, not the short dashes.
  • Is ref 1 a book or an article? If it's a book, add an ISBN if one exists, if it's an article, add where it was published in
    • yes it's a book, but an obscure one. I haven't been able to find an ISBN number, but have added an OCLC
  • The book name in ref 8 needs italicized, and a location should be added if one is available.
  • Refs 12, 13, and 14 need accessdate parameters.
  • Ref 16 needs an accessdate
  • Ref 21 needs an accessdate
  • The publisher for the Founders Online refs should be the National Archives, not the United States government
  • Refs 28, 30, 31, 33, and 34 need accessdates.
  • "Chalkley3, p. 149" - Why the 3? There's no indication of multiple volumes in the Chalkey refs
  • Ref 43 needs an accessdate
  • The refs in the bibliography need to be alphabetized
  • "Henning, William W. (180)" - Looks like you're missing a digit in the year
  • " Glanville, p. 78" - This short ref is provided, but there's no long ref for Glanville in the bibliography
  • There's stray ref tagging after the last entry in the bibliography

all issues addressed Newtack101 (talk) 00:34, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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  • The infobox and sources seem to indicate that Mathews was in the Virginia Senate in 1790, but this isn't mentioned Newtack101 (talk) 17:40, 16 April 2020 (UTC)in the article. It should be.[reply]
    • done. I'm not sure what to do in the infobox regarding the varying counties. Do you think I should add a new entry every year he represented a different set of counties, or leave it as is? Newtack101 (talk) 00:34, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • I think it would be acceptable. I'm not an expert on the infobox standards for this infobox. If you plan on taking this forward to A-class or FAC, they might say something about that.

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Placing this one on hold now, I'll make another run through after these are addressed.

Hog Farm, thank you for your review. I have addressed everything in your initial review. If you spot any addition issues, and I'll be happy to address them. Newtack101 (talk) 00:34, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I found one last thing. You have a ref to Kromkowski without any other context (43 I believe), but there's two separate refs to Kromkowski, so it's unclear which is referred to. Hog Farm (talk) 04:03, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Gotcha. I went ahead and put the full Kromkowski reference in for (43). Also, just want to make sure you saw my question about the infobox above. Thanks. Newtack101 (talk) 12:29, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I think that's everything. Promoting. Hog Farm (talk) 15:09, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]