Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 1996 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 01:33, 24 June 2017 (UTC)

Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 01:33, 24 June 2017 (UTC)

• "Kim Collins competed in both the 100 m sprint and the 4 × 100 m relay at the age of 20. Collins was the only man from St. Kitts and Nevis to compete in an individual event." These two sentences could be merged.
• Is there any way to not have the same beginning for the last two paragraphs/sentences?
• I think the background section could be expanded a little more. Maybe add details about their players' accomplishments (if any) before the Olympics?

That's it really.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 03:11, 28 June 2017 (UTC)

Done with all. Kees08 (Talk) 05:55, 28 June 2017 (UTC)