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Featured articleSMS Schwaben is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
Featured topic starSMS Schwaben is part of the Battleships of Germany series, a featured topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 22, 2010Good article nomineeListed
October 3, 2010Good topic candidatePromoted
August 25, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
January 6, 2014WikiProject A-class reviewReviewed
January 17, 2017Featured article candidatePromoted
Current status: Featured article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Schwaben/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 00:06, 22 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:


Comments

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  1. The text states there were six 45 cm (18 in) torpedo tubes while the inf box has 5 × 45 cm (17.7 in) torpedo tubes
  2. The footnote could use a cite
  3. The inf box has - Fate: Scrapped in 1920 but the text says - battleship was stricken from the naval register on 8 March 1921 needs clarification

--Jim Sweeney (talk) 00:21, 22 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

All three fixed, thanks for reviewing the article, Jim. Parsecboy (talk) 11:08, 22 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ranks correct?

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"On 29 August, Kapitän zur See (Captain at Sea) Walter Engelhardt replaced Alberts aboard Schwaben." - A Captain replaces a Rear Admiral (KAdm=Konteradmiral=Rear Admiral)! Serious? Any sources for this? 80.151.9.187 (talk)

Um, yes, the source cited in that paragraph... Parsecboy (talk) 09:53, 7 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]