Talk:Rip Owens/GA1
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 00:05, 13 February 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:01, 13 February 2025 (UTC)
I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:01, 13 February 2025 (UTC)
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[edit]- I would add a sentence about his post-football career at the can company.
saw action at quarterback in addition to guard,
add a comma before "in addition"- References are consistently formatted and appropriate for what is being cited
- Add access-date to Ref #13
- Spot checks: #4, #5, #11, #12, #13, and #15 all check out
Honestly, I couldn't find anything else. Nice work BeanieFan11! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:40, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:46, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
- Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:13, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
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