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There are phrases that make it sound like an article in a home magazine instead of a factual source, and there are just things in general that need cleanup.
-More places need citations, such as:
" This style of eating has recently become popular as a charity fund raiser in rural Britain, and is seen as a good way of meeting different neighbors in the community by virtue of each participant having 6 separate guests; it also has a long tradition in the United States."
-Get rid of image file names
-Rewrite in a matter that doesn't sound like an advertisement or anything like that
-"Safari Suppers can always be used as a way of dating..." doesn't belong in references.
Like the message above, this article needs a clean up as it wrote 'Although it is a little difficult to explain' which makes it sound as if someone it talk face to face with somebody else.72.53.147.104 (talk) 18:44, 24 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
