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@Govvy, could you point out the statements that seem a problem to you? Rejoy2003(talk) 15:36, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

There are lots of what I call weasel words, it isn't a good read, feels very promotional like a CV. Your very first sentence; Lotlikar was a student at Parvatibai Chowgule College in Margao, Goa, during the early stages of his career. More correctly you could would write Lotlikar studied at Parvatibai Chowgule College in Margao, Goa. Keep things precise and neutral. Another problem, you've linked to another biography wikipedia article in a citation and at the same time, the wiki article on the paper. You haven't even linked to an external source. That is not a good citation, I would be more inclined to send the article straight to WP:AfD on what I've seen so far. Govvy (talk) 15:49, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Govvy could you be more brief and simple about this? Another problem, you've linked to another biography wikipedia article in a citation and at the same time, the wiki article on the paper. And what is the external link you're referring? If you're talking about O Heraldo reference, I don't know why that is not a good citation since Wikipedia doesn't prohibit you using an offline source that being a literal newspaper. Also I'm still building this article, so maybe cut me a slack would ya? Remember rome wasn't build in a day. Secondly, I don't have a problem if you take it to AFD but it'll be a waste of time and simply discouraging for inclusionists like me. I think we can fix this problem. Also I've fixed the above problem of the "College thingy" Rejoy2003(talk) 16:02, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]