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Good articlePilot (Millennium) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 14, 2012Good article nomineeListed
July 26, 2012Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 03:27, 12 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Issues:

  • Plot: "hallucinating pouring over a blonde stripper" I assume the word 'blood' is supposed to go in there somewhere
  • Plot: "formed of retired" I would say 'from' instead of 'of'. If you want of, used the word 'comprised' instead of 'formed'
  • Plot: I would use a different word besides 'spooks'
  • Production: Comma after "Ruby Tipm"
  • Production: "Millennium received higher viewing figures during its first season that The X-Files had done" 'that' should be 'then'

Those are the only problems I can find. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:15, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for looking at this one for me. I think I've addressed everything you've raised here, let me know if there's anything else you think needs seen to. GRAPPLE X 23:14, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]