Talk:Out on Bond/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Medxvo (talk) 22:53, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 20:39, 26 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 12:54, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The "Out on Bond" sample is 23 seconds long; it should be 8 seconds long (10% of length) as per WP:SAMPLE. I don't think there's a need for the sample, but if you want to include it, the first eight seconds of the current sample would be good enough
- Oh wow, I did not know about this rule so thank you for telling me! I changed it on here and my other articles with sound samples.
"surprise released" - "surprise-released" (in lead and prose)
- Done
"he began recording the EP" - wikilink "EP" to extended play
- Done wikilinked "extended play" and put (EP) in body
"Peter A. Berry" - "Peter A. Berry of HipHopDX"?
- Done Forgot to do this
"on the following "A2Z" - "on the following track, "A2Z"
- Done
"on "Long Nights" as "lackluster" - "on the third track, "Long Nights", as "lackluster"
- Done
"The penultimate track "Ice Spice" is a reference ..." - "The penultimate track, "Ice Spice", is a reference ..."
- Done
"The final track "Overthinking" consists ..." - "The final track, "Overthinking", consists ..."
- Done

Spotchecks from this revision

Ref 1(a) - OK
Ref 1(c) - OK
Ref 1(e) - OK
Ref 2(b) - OK
Ref 2(c) - OK
Ref 2(e) - OK
Ref 4(b) - OK
Ref 4(e) - OK
Ref 4(f) - OK

Very short and sweet article, I'll put this On hold for now! Medxvo (talk) 12:54, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the quick review as always!! Addressed all comments Locust member (talk) 21:53, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for addressing everything, Locust member! The only remaining thing is that the sample quality can be reduced to 64 kbps (I think the 23-second version had a reduced quality if I'm not mistaken, so this shouldn't be a big deal). I'm ready to pass once this is addressed! Medxvo (talk) 22:22, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Just compressed it down to 61 kbps. Locust member (talk) 22:48, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Passing now, congratulations! :)) Medxvo (talk) 22:52, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.