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GA Review

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Comments:

  1. Is it likely that an article for East Schroon River Road will be created? If not, remove redlink
  2. Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
  3. In lead, add "to" after "opposite"
  4. Mention when CR 64 was created in lead
  5. In first sentence of route description, wikilink Starbuckville, New York
  6. If this article is about County Route 64, is it nessecary to mention a different road that parallels it on the other side of the river?
  7. "the Schroon" sounds colliqual
  8. Switch order of last two sentences in first paragraph of route description and change information in past tense to present tense
  9. "which is progressing northward nearby" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
  10. "while re-entering forestry" also sounds awkward
  11. Is the picture in the route description even of the actual route? I would suggest trying to get a picture of the actual route itself
  12. In third sentence of history, replace "of" with "on"
  13. Are the exact years NY 9M was created and decommissioned known?
  14. "re-designated" should not be hyphened

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 15:08, 2 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 14:49, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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