Talk:Moore Park, Toronto

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I took out the paragraph about how pleasant Moore Park is because it was entirely POV. Something like that requires documentation, I would think. I don't consider Moore Park particularly beautiful, for example (ostentatious I could agree with), so I would like to see some evidence that a substantial number of Torontonians do think it's beautiful. Some of the assertions were also vague (about its being community oriented, for example – requires an explanation of what community orientation is) or redundant (the previous paragraph had already said it was a rich neighbourhood, which implies it's among the richest in Toronto). And I question the validity of the description of the mix of houses. John FitzGerald 18:45, 20 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]