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Next to last paragraph rewrite

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I rewrote the next to last paragraph as it was quite a jumble. I tried to keep the information that was originally presented accurate in the rewrite - as far as I could understand those facts. I may have introduced errors unknowingly. If this is the case, please feel free to correct those errors. At this point I think a reversion to the original with accurate information would be worse than this rewrite with possible errors simply due to the originals construction.THX1136 (talk) 21:29, 4 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]