Talk:Mall (song)/GA1
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 23:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Genre: Folk rock → folk elements are not part of the gerne, is just influences
Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- Universal Music → Universal Music via digital download and streaming services
- and fans → remove
- occasions in Amsterdam and Madrid → occasions, including in Amsterdam and Madrid.
- Done
Background and composition
[edit]- song length → songs length
- together with → and
- With a duration time of three minutes, the Albanian language song → The Albanian language song, which lasts three minutes,
- Add the release dates here
- Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:25, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Critical reception
[edit]- President Meta additionally praised his voice and performance → very bias
- Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:26, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Music video and promotion
[edit]- intercut ten times, and as the video progresses, it additionally features → intercut several times, and as the video progresses, it features
- frantic → not very encyclopedic
- Add the music video source at the end of the description.
Not done
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: I hope its correct now.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Festivali i Këngës
[edit]- Fine
Lisbon
[edit]- small band of instrumentalists, → remove instrumentalists
- Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Personnel
[edit]- Fine
Track listing
[edit]- Fine
Release history
[edit]- Fine
References
[edit]- Rate Your Music → non-reliable
- Reference 21 → publisher, not work
- Reference 33 and 34 → no publisher or work mentioned
- The voice source is not working properly → archive it
- Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Overall
[edit]- You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:13, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: Done--Lorik17 (talk) 11:57, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Iaof2017: I made changes to he genre regarding the sources and you forgot something in the music video section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you, I followed the comment for the music video section, I hope i did it right.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Iaof2017: I made changes to he genre regarding the sources and you forgot something in the music video section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)