Luke Henman is currently a Other sports good article nominee. Nominated by XR228 (talk) at 00:57, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
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Short description: Canadian ice hockey player (born 2000)
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Hello, I'm GhostRiver. I'll be reviewing this article against the good article criteria. By doing so, I am earning points for the WikiCup and the January 2025 GAN Backlog Drive. Although a quid pro quo review is not necessary, it is appreciated. You can see what open good article nominations I have here.
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"After playing five seasons of major junior hockey"
Henman has played with the Kraken's minor league affiliates, the Charlotte Checkers and the Allen Americans during the 2021–22 season, and the Coachella Valley Firebirds ever since. → Making his professional hockey debut in 2021, Henman has played for the Kraken's minor league affiliates: the Charlotte Checkers, the Allen Americans, and the Firebirds.
"Some two months later, On August 29, Henman he was traded"
4th-round → fourth-round
what day in December?
2016–17 regular season stats?
details of his one 2017 playoff game?
"Rookie of the Month" is capitalized like so
Henman had moved up 64 spots, all the way to 83rd place. → Between the Midterm and Final Rankings, Henman had climbed 64 spots, finishing 83rd among North American skaters.
Henman was drafted by the Carolina Hurricanes → The Carolina Hurricanes selected Henman
no details on the 2018–19 season?
second in points behind whom?
"Team of the Week" is capitalized like so
was made captain → was named captain
naming a captain in January is odd. what happened there?
how did he go from a Canes draft pick to signing with the Kraken?
and he would make his professional debut → and he made his professional debut
why was he dropped down to the ECHL? why was he called back up?
The Kraken's new AHL affiliate for the 2022–23 season was the Coachella Valley Firebirds. Henman was named to the Firebirds' inaugural roster. → The Kraken established a new AHL affiliate for the 2022–23 season, the Coachella Valley Firebirds, with Henman named to the inaugural roster.
what did Henman do during the 2022–23 regular season?
Personally, I have not seen the need to include citations on his career stats (baseball doesn't do it, and those stats are easily accessible information), but it is recommended procedure
Article is missing an early life section with basic information such as his birth date, birthplace, parents' names, and time playing minor ice hockey in Dartmouth
I am going to be quite honest here—I'm close to failing this article outright on WP:GACR 3a: it addresses the main aspects of the topic. This is not a suitably broad overview of Henman's career thus far. However, I reserve my quickfails for WP:CV and WP:OR violations, which are more seriously detrimental to building the encyclopedia. I do want you to know that you have a lot of work to do before this is up to GA-quality. Putting on hold for now. — GhostRiver17:44, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
