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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Onlandry, Jjgourley, Kmariemuir. Peer reviewers: Cjmackenzie96, Katharynrose, Slbetts.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): PinkPanther4597. Peer reviewers: Krystal Structure, Belle2018, Lindove.

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Feedback on WGST 3991 proposal

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Excellent choice. See note below, on the other Lotte Strauss. If both meet notability requirements it would be helpful to create an article on the Holocaust survivor. We will discuss disambiguation in class. Estregger 00:44, 1 February 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Estregger (talkcontribs)

A different Lotte Strauss

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Note that another Lotte Strauss born in Germany in 1913, but still alive at 97 in 2011, may come up when researching. Take care:

Snori (talk) 01:22, 14 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Ideas for Article Improvement

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  • Perhaps there should be a disclaimer for the reader about the existence of the other Lotte Strauss, who was a Holocaust survivor.
  • A concise summary of all her work in pediatric and perinatal pathology would be nice to have in her Works section.

Possible Resources

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Here are some resources I thought would help with improving the article. Please let me know if there are any that shouldn't be included, or if there others that should be included. The research article would only be used to summarize Lotte Strauss's work in the pediatric and perinatal pathology field.

1. Biochemical and histologic determinants in the prognosis of neuroblastoma Gitlow, Stanley E. ; Dziedzic, Laura Bertani ; Strauss, Lotte ; Greenwood, Steven M. ; Dziedzic, Stanley W. Cancer, October 1973, Vol.32(4), pp.898-905 [Peer Reviewed Journal]

2. The Mount Sinai Hospital, New York, N. Y. by Donald Gribetz & Lotte Strauss

3. 924 CYTOGENETIC AND CLINICAL DEFINITION OF TRISOMY 8: BASED ON OBSERVATIONS IN PARTIAL TRISOMY 8(ql3→qter) Mirja S Somer ; Ranjit K Sachdev ; Lotte Strauss ; Sophie Paciuc ; Lillian Y Hsu Pediatric Research, 1978, Vol.12(S4), p.517 [Peer Reviewed Journal]

4. Supra-valvular Stenosis of the Aorta Kreel, Isadore ; Reiss, Raphael ; Strauss, Lotte ; Blumenthal, Sidney ; Baronofsky, Ivan D. Annals of Surgery, 1959, Vol.149(4), pp.519-524 [Peer Reviewed Journal]

PinkPanther4597 (talk) 00:12, 4 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

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I think you have a lot of good information in your lead section, but your actual article is a little sparse. Maybe consider rearranging your information to include only the most important things about Dr. Strauss in the lead section, then add an "education" and "career" section where you can go into a bit more detail on those specific topics! Krystal Structure (talk) 23:26, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Edits

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Looks great! We went through and made a few minor grammatical, syntax, and technical edits but otherwise it seems quite solid. We are impressed with your transformation of this article and your disambiguation work. Cjmackenzie96 (talk) 19:22, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Partner"?

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This sounds as if they lived together, maybe "collaborator" would be better? 213.134.178.129 (talk) 20:33, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]