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GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 16:42, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox

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  • Add the radio edit lenght and state the difference between both

 Done

Lead

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  • through Columbia and Sony Music → through Columbia and Sony Music via digital download and CD single
    • Removed the digital download thing altogheter, as they were not a thing back then. The digital version is just the CD single converted to digital outlets, I realized. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mention Tim Norell
The sample is mentioned, I don't think he is that important. He is not credited on the CD single, just in the album credits. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Background

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  • Seem fine.

Composition and lyrics

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  • Fine

Critical reception

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  • AllMusic → wikilink
Already linked in the section above. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I missed it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:55, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance

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  • noted as "surprising" → why surprasing?
Removed. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The song charted in the top-ten for nine weeks → The song spent nine weeks in the top-ten
Done.
  • "Lena Anthem" debuted at number five on the Svensktoppen chart on 28 November 2004, after being a contender the week before." → I wonder if this is relevant as a chart, it doesn't seem like. Secondly a conter for what?
A contender to enter the chart, it "bubbled under" in a way. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The song also charted on Trackslistan, where it debuted and peaked at number seven" → same as previous, these are just radio charts for diferent stations, not relevant.
Both Svensktoppen and Trackslistan were considered by record labels to be highly important for Swedish-language singers back in the day. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
You should state that, along with the link. It's quite importat so there is a context and the reason why is not on the table below. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:57, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

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  • Don't wikilink red links
Template:Interlanguage link multi creates a red link. Krogshow doesn't have an English equivalent. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • There are some instances of Sweedenthat make hard to understand the meaning of the sentences. "f her 2011 krogshow [sv] Min drömshow – 25 år som artist" and "performed the song on her 2016 krogshow Jag är ingen älskling."

 Done

Track listing

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  • Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the tracks and their lenght

 Done

Credits and personnel

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  • Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the credits and the personnel
Done.
  • Tim Norell → he received a songwriter credit
Revised in "Composition and lyrics", he received a music credit only. Swedish credits are usually split into music and lyrics, which are different components of songwriting. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Charts

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  • Fine.

Release history

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  • Don't link the labels

 Done

References

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  • As per nominator below
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  • Fine

Overall

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  • Don't address any comments until I say so.

@PancakeMistake: I left you something on the Chart performance. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:02, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Added info about the charts. Pancake (talk) 18:25, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]