Talk:Lari White/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ChrisTofu11961 (talk · contribs) 03:20, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   I made some grammatical errors instead of having you do it. I do not like when other editors expect me to fix a period, when they could have just done it themselves. Some things to remember:

• Be careful with your use of commas. You're often guilty of using too many when they are not really necessary.
• Avoid references in the infobox. I recently learned that it's supposed to be a snapshot of the article (You already had referenced the fact she played guitar and piano in the article for example)
• Avoid paragraphs that are too long. Some of the paragraphs I had to split.
• Make sure most sections of the article include years. The "later career" section did not and it looked awkward (the early life section is OK to not include; I see that as optional)

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

2. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

4. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

5. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

6. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Excellent work here! I learned some more about Lari White. It's a shame I only know her from Cast Away. Thank you for making this a GA article!