Talk:Keep It Goin Xav/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Medxvo (talk) 00:04, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 19:08, 23 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 22:08, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I can't see "Hosted by DJ Renessy" mentioned in prose at all?
- Interview clips with the mixtape's host, DJ Rennessy in Composition
"After releasing his previous mixtape, Install, in 2022, he became a prominent figure in the post-hyperpop and digicore scenes in 2023" - is this lead-worthy? Keep It Goin Xav isn't hyperpop or digicore, so this seems a bit irrelevant to me
- You're right, removed.
"which features Yhapojj" - Yhapojj is overlinked
- Done
"Nettspend's appearance" - "Nettspend's appearance on the track"
- Done
"deemed Keep It Goin Xav as" - no need for "as"
- Done
"as well as" - "and"
- Done

Spotchecks from this revision

Ref 2(b) - OK
Ref 2(e) - OK
Ref 3(b) - OK
Ref 3(c) - OK
Ref 5(c) - OK
Ref 5(e) - OK
Ref 7(b) - OK
Ref 7(e) - can't see "glitch and bop track"
- I forgot to add in The Fader source there.
Ref 7(f) - OK
Ref 7(h) - OK
Ref 7(k) - OK
Ref 7(l) - OK
Ref 7(n) - OK
Ref 8(b) - can't see "smooth vocals"
- I gave this phrase: "silky flows" synonyms; if you can come up with a closer paraphrase please suggest! I would like to avoid using quotes here as I want to report it as a statement.
  - Never mind, this is just fine as it is, I just didn't notice it!
Ref 8(c) - OK
Ref 11(b) - OK
Ref 12 - OK

Back with another one, Locust member! Good work, will put this On hold for now. Medxvo (talk) 22:08, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks so much for two reviews in one day!!!! I cannot express my thanks enough; I will get to your article tonight :p Locust member (talk) 23:55, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

No worries, pls take your time, I was just free today :)) Passing this now!! Medxvo (talk) 00:04, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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