Talk:Jon Anabo

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A fact from Jon Anabo appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 11 June 2017 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that American football player Jon Anabo was half of the "best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast"?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2017/June. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Jon Anabo.

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:17, 10 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 09:17, 10 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Early career

"Anabo attended Armijo High School before playing college football at Vallejo Junior College " - before going on to play college football at Vallejo Junior College Done
"In 1961, Anabo transferred to Fresno State to play for the Bulldogs" - mention it was the Fresno State Bulldogs and wikilink it since it is the first time it will be mentioned in the prose Done
"Anabo was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset over the University of the Pacific in the final seconds of the game." - He was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset victory of the University of the Pacific in the game's final seconds Done
"Fresno State defeated Bowling Green 36–6" - reword to Fresno State defeated the Bowling Green Falcons 36–6 Done
Wikilink United Press International Done
"In 1962, Anabo and Carter were described as the "best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast". - described by whom?

The source doesn't specifically say. It says "Their pair of quarterbacks, Jon Anabo and Beau Carter, are billed as the best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast" Thoughts? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:32, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Add a wikilink to touchdown again to help those unfamilar with football Done

Professional career

Wikilink the first mention of Cleveland Browns, the Edmonton Eskimos and the Canadian Football League in the prose Done
Perhaps an explanation of what position Walter Roberts played in will help non-football fans Done

Overall a good effort has been made. On hold until the minor quibbles have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 10:33, 10 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'm helping Rob with his reviews. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:58, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Multiple facts in the infobox are unsourced, like the DOB, POB, height, and weight. MX (✉ • ✎) 14:21, 10 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I think these come from the Canadian Pro Football Encyclopedia source. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:26, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Then I suggest that they be directly linked to the encyclopedia source. MWright96 (talk) 19:12, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@BU Rob13: Can you confirm? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:25, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, everything in the infobox comes from that source. Specifically, the pages in the 140ish range for the articles currently under review (whichever one is actually cited for the statistics in the article). ~ Rob₁₃^Talk 22:07, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96, how should we add the source to the infobox? When you try to do it, it looks kind of weird. [1] WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 22:19, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Can't find an appropriate way to add the source so I have moved to the quarterback section. MWright96 (talk) 12:40, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Is

it only me who feels that this is a bare-bones article, which fails short of GA? ∯WBG^converse 14:45, 12 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]