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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Madsngo. Peer reviewers: Gertjjor.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:26, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Editing Article

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To everyone involved in contributing to this article, I am making a ton of contributions! Please edit and revise as you wish. Madsngo (talk) 02:52, 18 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Pre-move Review

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Hello Madsngo, I looked over your article history and see that you've done quite a bit to improve the article!

That being said, you don't seem to have made the changes that we discussed yet. Also, your text currently reads a bit like an advertisement. Phrases like "decorated with world-class decorations, simple, yet modern" are definitely not written from a neutral point of view.

These critiques aside, I suspect that you will be able to clean things up and be ready to upload soon. I've created a page that has a number of suggestions that will improve your article. Additionally, you can find the instructions for how to move the article.

Please review the detailed explanation of Task 6 on our class wiki and let me know if you have any questions!  一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 05:17, 14 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Madsngo,

I reviewed you wiki article, and you can see my feedback at this link: http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/User:Madsngo/JOEY/Gertjjor_Peer_Review

This was kind of a fun article to review since it is relavant to both of us.

Gertjjor (talk) 08:24, 6 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]