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July 19, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed
October 25, 2011	Good topic candidate	Promoted

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On 20 November 2021, it was proposed that this article be moved from Homer Simpson in: 'Kidney Trouble' to Homer Simpson in: "Kidney Trouble". The result of the discussion was moved.

Perhaps a bit unprofessional?

(Translation: He would have to pee before he popped. pee then pop.)

Who added that? Anyone think that its a tad unprofessional?

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 15:23, 19 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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It is broad in its coverage.
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"In reality, Grampa's bladder- not kidneys- would have ruptured from "holding it in"." Does a character say this in the episode, or it the writer's own tangent? Not sure if it belongs here
Remember sentences with quotes need to end with citations
Make sure there's consistent date formatting (i.e. ref 6 compared to 7)

I made a few minor tweaks myself, and am placing the review on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 16:12, 19 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

All done! Thanks for the review! :) Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:34, 19 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Pass for GA. Nice work! Ruby2010 comment! 18:31, 19 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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