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This article is in good shape. Just a few comments from me:
suggest "but with the same high speedas Canopus."
Done
there are rounding differences between the body and infobox for beam
Fixed
draft should be draught in the body
Good catch - one of the reasons I don't generally write a lot of articles on British ships ;)
the draught figures don't match between the infobox and body
Fixed
the displacement conversions are to LT in the body and T in the infobox
Fixed
the body doesn't support the number of shafts in the infobox
Added a bit on that
the kW conversions don't match between body and infobox
Fixed
the body says ten 12-pounders, but the infobox says sixteen?
Guess I should have looked closer at the infobox, eh?
where were the TTs, in pairs amidships on either side?
Burt and Conway's don't say - I'd assume bow, stern, and each broadside but I can't say for sure.
the belt conversions are rounded differently between the body and infobox
Should all be fixed
same for the turret, barbette and conning tower thicknesses
As above
just in general, the armour conversions in the infobox are in cm, but in mm in the body, which is a bit inconsistent
As above
suggest "The gun shields for her 3-pounder guns were removed the following year."
Works for me.
expand "scheduled coronation festivities" to state whose coronation? Reading it, I thought it might have been a monarch of Egypt.
Good idea
"the last two ships of the 5th Squadron to join the fleet" were these London and Prince of Wales, or Topaze and Diamond?
The former - Topaze and Diamond weren't part of the squadron - clarified this a bit
not just the Landing at Cape Helles, also the Landing at Anzac which were concurrent and it was also conducted by the British fleet. Perhaps drop "Landing at Cape Helles" at this point and introduce it a bit further on (see below)?
suggest "On the night of 24–25 April, soldiers transferred from the troopships to Implacable, Cornwallis, and Euryalus, for the Landing at Cape Helles. The ships then steamed..."
See if what I did in conjunction with the other change above instead works for you
the Second Battle of Krithia also involved British troops as well as ANZACs
Fixed
"Implacable, along with the battleships"
Good catch
File:Formidable class battleship diagrams Brasseys 1906.jpg needs a PD-1923 tag
This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:40, 19 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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