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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 20:24, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Ok, reviewing now. Miyagawa (talk) 20:24, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DAB links.
  • Image is good.
  • Just one duplicate link - flotilla in the second to last sentence of Construction and service.
  • Design and description: Any chance of mentioning the speed of the destroyers of that era to provide some context to the end of the first paragraph?
  • Link quarterdeck
  • Need a cite for "and Captain Albert Scott assumed command on 5 July."
  • Just a random thought. Would it be worthwhile creating a category for ships built at Pembroke Royal Dockyard? Might be a nice way to tie together all the work you've done over the last month. I wouldn't expect you to do this by the end of the competition when you could be earning points! ;)