Talk:Gunther E. Rothenberg/GA1
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk) 20:05, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
I'm assuming that the Villa de Madrid is a passenger ship of some sort, but can you clarify please?"Rothenberg completed with a bachelor's degree from" doesn't sound right to me. Maybe graduated or something similar instead of completed (or, this could just be a phrase I don't run into writing my Kaiserliche Marine articles ;)- fixed.
You should specify what his muzzle-loaders were. Many people would probably know what you're talking about, but many would not.I believe keynote is one word (the last paragraph in the Education & Career section).
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
This edit by another editor needs to be either sourced or removed (more than likely just reverted, given the peacock-ery going on there).
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- See the diff linked above.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Are there no pictures available? Since he passed away in 2004, a copyrighted photo of him would qualify for Fair Use. If you can't find a photo, that's no big deal though.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Excellent work on this article, Ruth. There are just a few things that need to be ironed out before I'll pass the article for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 20:05, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: