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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:19, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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Thanks for this TRM ! I clean this up post the other GAN reviews so hopefully in better shape. I was able to change the columns of the table per the MOS:ACCESS point earlier, but the rows did not work for me (I was not able to format right). If you could show me how hte first two rows would work, I will fill in the rest. I will clean up the Philip Treacy article now, so better if you started with this one first? thanks. Britishfinance (talk) 17:17, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

No worries. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 17:22, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks The Rambling Man, I have made all those changes below. Hope that works? Britishfinance (talk) 15:38, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • I would work to remove the references from the lead, and make sure all the information is mentioned and expanded upon in the main part of the article.
    •  Done
  • The height in the lead is rounded and therefore the conversion to feet is different from there to the infobox.
    •  Done
  • "+10–hour" I guess this means "at least 10 hour-"? but I'm not sure.
    •  Done
  • PW Joyce -> P. W. Joyce.
    •  Done
  • "The geology of the Galty Mountains are described" geology is singular here, so "is" described, isn't it?
    •  Done
  • " Silurian Shales" sea of blue and shale isn't normally capitalised.
    •  Done
  • "by tors built of conglomerate rock " built of seems odd in this context, aren't they naturally formed?
    •  Done, changed to "formed from" as more natural
  • "with deep corries and" link corrie here instead of "of deep corries, most of"
    •  Done
  • "purple sandstone" is mentioned in the infobox, nowhere else.
    •  Done, infobox now says purple-reddish, per Geology section.
  • "by loughs. Lough Diheen" repetitive lough usage.
    •  Done
  • ("SMC") no need for quotes.
    •  Done
  • "10–hour" hyphen.
    •  Done
  • "The MountainViews Online Database list" overlinked. Twice.
    •  Done
  • I would also allow the table caption to be centrally aligned.
    •  Done
  • Row scopes would be great on the names. Copy the way I demonstrated last time (I think).
    •  Done, thanks
  • Translation sorting is a bit odd because it's basically free text, but things like "quote marks" mess it up even more.
    •  Done
  • "the eastern-cairn" not sure this needs hyphenation but also repetitive.
    •  Done
  • "over 4 years" more than four years.
    •  Done
  • ("SEMRA") again, not in quotes.
    •  Done
  • "1922.[4][6] [13]" remove space.
    •  Done
  • " PW Joyce suggests" P. W.
    •  Done
  • "the NW of" northwest.
    •  Done
  • No SHOUTING in ref titles.
    •  Done

That's it for now, so it's on hold. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:20, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

All good. I made a few minor tweaks, but passed to GA. Nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:59, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Great, thanks again TRM. Britishfinance (talk) 16:00, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]