Jump to content

Talk:Economy of Punjab, India

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

[edit]

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jsidhu23. Peer reviewers: Jsidhu23.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 20:07, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Dr. Singh's comment on this article

[edit]

Dr. Singh has reviewed this Wikipedia page, and provided us with the following comments to improve its quality:


Comment 1. The current Punjab came into existence in November 1, 1966 and is now the land of three rivers (not five rivers). It was land of five rivers during the period of Maharaja Ranjit Singh rule. When it was divided in 1947, the Indian Punjab was land of four rivers, that is, Ravi, Beas, Satluj and Jamuna. After division of Punjab in 1966 it is now land of three rivers. This historical fact needs correction.

Comment2. It was highest per capita income state till end of 20th century but now ranked 7th in terms of per capita income.

Comment 3. There are quite a few typographical errors and it also needs upgradation like completion of some electricity producing plant.


We hope Wikipedians on this talk page can take advantage of these comments and improve the quality of the article accordingly.

Dr. Singh has published scholarly research which seems to be relevant to this Wikipedia article:


  • Reference : Singh, Lakhwinder & Jain, Varinder, 2006. "Unorganised Manufacturing Industry in the Era of Globalization: A Study of Punjab," MPRA Paper 197, University Library of Munich, Germany.

ExpertIdeasBot (talk) 14:46, 24 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Jeevan's Critique of "Economy of Punjab" Page

[edit]

1. General Comments:

  • This page is rightfully marked as a "Start-Class" article of "High Importance". Though the page makes a noteworthy attempt at thoroughly diving into the economy of Punjab, it is lacking a depth of information. Punjab is a diverse region of India, and although the article makes a good effort in organizing each of the major industries and facets of the Punjabi economy, the page could use a deeper level of insight.
  • Example A: The Green Revolution of India, which took place primarily in Punjab, is not explicitly mentioned.
  • Example B: A map of Punjab could be useful for readers.
  • Example C: Discussing the major cities more closely would help strengthen the article.


2. Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference?

  • There are many parts of the article which could use additional,reliable source material in order to strengthen the page.
  • Example: The "important industries" portion of the article is in dire need of source material; in fact it is explicitly stated in a template message.


3. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?

  • The GDP portion of the page only goes as far as 2011 and is the main topic in need of an update.
  • Pretty much the whole article could use some updating - nothing especially urgent though.
  • Please look to the examples under Point #1 of this critique for some directions to take in terms of missing information

Jsidhu23 (talk) 04:16, 11 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[edit]

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 2 external links on Economy of Punjab, India. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at {{Sourcecheck}}).

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 20:25, 19 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[edit]

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified one external link on Economy of Punjab, India. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 22:43, 16 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]