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Translation issues
[edit]There are still passages that need cleaning up such as "At 3:40 am, he boarded a grey Toyota Altis sedan at the airport purportedly provided by GMM Grammy and would be transport him to the opening ceremony." And the Chinese citations should have at least the publication names translated to English.
The case has generated international news coverage, so it would be a good idea to replace some of the citations with English-language sources where possible per WP:NONENG. --Paul_012 (talk) 05:38, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I must have had multiple tabs open and edited the wrong one and removed the latest edit to the quoted sentence, though that didn't solve the broken grammar. I've rewrote it, but there are still other spots. On the whole, though, I think the article focuses a bit much on the small details and could be improved by providing a better view of the big picture. --Paul_012 (talk) 05:55, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
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