Talk:Dirty Picture/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ΣПDiПG–STΛЯT 22:53, 6 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• "Dirty Picture" is a song by Taio Cruz. Expand it a little bit, maybe something like "Dirty Picture" is a song by American R&B singer Taio Cruz.
• Link Fraser T. Smith, Lady Gaga, and Dr. Luke.
• Change "...of the song has been generally positive" to "...of the song was generally positive"
• Remove the word "dumb" I'm assuming this was vandalism that went undetected?

Infobox

• Link Fraser T. Smith in the writers section.

Music video

• Maybe expand with some more information if you can find anything. Maybe something about where it was filmed, and when?

Track listing

• Remove the "feat" Kesha parts.
• Possibly retitle them to something such as "Digital EP" and "Digital Remix EP"

 Done Everything has been changed except Music video because i spent like an hour on that section, its as good as its going to get, unfortunately it didnt get alot of coverage for some reason. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 23:13, 6 December 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

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