Talk:Deuce 'n Domino/GA1

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Being that I felt it would be easier to make the changes myself, I went ahead and did that. This is the diff of change I made [1], so feel free to let me know if you disagree with any of them. If you do, we can discuss it here, as I won't be closing this just yet.

But still, a few comments

Explain "enhancement talent" or re-word it so it makes sense.
- I added a link, but I will not explain it in the lead.
Link to "Crack 'em in da Mouth"
- Done.
Add refs to the finishing moves in the in wrestling section
- Have been added.
Maybe alter the Cherry image captain to something like "Cherry was their manager from the team's creation to whenever"
- Done.
I have the WWE Encyclopedia. There is an entry on Deuce and Domino on page 76. You may want to add this in the article, so here's some information: WWE Encyclopedia by Brian Shields and Kevin Sullivan. Publisher: DK/BradyGames, a division of Penguin Group (USA) Inc. Published in 2009. The content on Deuce and Domino's entry is:

"Deuce & Domino made their WWE debut in 2007, claiming to be the biggest attraction in all of the past, present, and future. Led to the ring by Domino's sister, Cheery, the duo considered themselves God's gift to women.
Deuce & Domino shocked the world when they defeated Brian Kendrick and Paul London for a WWE Tag Team Championship. They held the titles for four months, eventually losing the combination of MVP & Matt Hardy. Cracks in the team began to show when Cherry started to run around with Michelle McCool. Deuce & Domino kicked her to the curb in favor of Maryse. Unfortunately for fans of these throwbacks, a lost match prompted a brawl between the pair, ending their partnership in the process. In August 2008, Domino left WWE and Deuce tried his hand at singles competition."

Use the above ref whenever possible in the article.
- Added book source.

Good luck with the above changes. iMatthew ^talk at 01:31, 13 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 15:34, 14 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

No problem! Passing :) iMatthew ^talk at 23:28, 14 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]