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GA Review

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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 03:30, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:30, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist

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Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. Fine
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. Fine
2. Verifiable with no original research:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. Fine
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). Fine
2c. it contains no original research. Fine
3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. Fine
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). Fine
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. Fine
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. Per definition
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. Single fair-use image, adequate FUR
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. Album's cover, clearly acceptable
7. Overall assessment. Pending

Comments

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  • Possible further sources:
Crime and Dissonance at Stylus Magazine
Already cited in 5 places. :P
ENNIO MORRICONE; Crime and Dissonance at The Stranger
Having a look now. GRAPPLE X 04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Source spotchecks (based on this revision)

  • FN1
    • A Dagored appears nowhere in the article. Otherwise checks out
    • B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • D Checks out, no close paraphrasing
  • FN5
    • A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • D Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • E Having trouble with the first sentence. He says "more relevant", perhaps as a way to avoid the "unfortunate" kitsch that Morricone has become known for. Otherwise okay.
  • FN8
    • A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
  • FN11
    • A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
    • B Checks out, no close paraphrasing

Further discussion

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