Talk:Bound High!

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Review: September 14, 2019. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 13:33, 11 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I've always been fascinated with anything related to Virtual Boy, so I'll give this a look. Namcokid47 (talk) 13:33, 11 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry it took longer than expected, I wanted to finish up Space Invaders Virtual Collection before I did anything else.

Lead

"Despite being showcased on various trading shows and completed for release" should be changed to "Despite being showcased at various trade shows and completed for release".

Fixed.

Gameplay

"players" should be just "player" as this is a single-player game.

I use "players" in my writing to refer less to multi-player and more to refer to the people who may play the same. I think it's more of a stylistic choice than anything.

History

The last two sentences in the second paragraph should be connected , ie "both the United States and Japan, however it was left unreleased". Should also change it to "was never released" as I think it flows better.

Fixed.

Reception

Nintendo Power should be linked.

Fixed.

References

Some of the sources are inconsistent with how the dates are formatted, which needs to be fixed.

Namcokid47 (talk) 04:13, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed.

If this is all of the issues I believe I've fixed everything @Namcokid47:. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 04:27, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I think everything looks good, I've now promoted it. Great work! Namcokid47 (talk) 04:30, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]