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Requested edits

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These edits are meant to allay the advertisement fears. If not sufficient to have the template removed, please notify me and I'll make sure I address any further issues. Find the markup in hidden text following. Thank you for your time! JaneStrauss (talk) 23:41, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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I have just edited the article to remove advertising like tone, and I have left a message with the editor who assigned the template to garner their support for removing it. If this is accomplished I will remove the template. Regards, Spintendo ᔦᔭ 01:46, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Spintendo: Thank you! Would you be kind enough to include the infobox and inline photos as DGG suggested (total of 3: logo, one store front, and one interior below)? JaneStrauss (talk) 10:32, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@DGG: I'm sorry to bother you once more, but I wanted to know what the status of the article's copy edit was. Any feedback you could provide is most welcome, specifically as regards the ad tag. I listed a few links to the photos available at Commons in hidden text above (these include the logo, as well as several store pics) - I'm not entirely sure as to what exactly you proposed regarding them. Finally, I am also curious as to what the OTRS response period is after a photo has been released through that process. Thank you! JaneStrauss (talk) 00:56, 21 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
OTRS can be slow; it can be helpful to send a reminder after a month.
As for promotionalism, I have just dealt with it. DGG ( talk ) 21:25, 21 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you, will do! JaneStrauss (talk) 23:33, 25 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Requested corrections to typos

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  • "In 2017, the company opened a 2,700 square-foot flagship store" - was comapny
  • "in 2006. In 2015, the company launched Lune+Aster" - was in 2006; > In 2015

Thank you! JaneStrauss (talk) 00:29, 4 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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  Edit request implemented    Spintendo  02:58, 4 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]