Talk:Blackwater: The Rise of the World's Most Powerful Mercenary Army
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"Scahill argues"
[edit]Is it accurate to repeatedly characterize the author's writing as "argument/arguing/argues" or can we find a better verb? User:Pedant 76.95.104.7 (talk) 16:21, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
Good point. Perhaps better would be something like 'in the book, Scahill describes his research and etc' or something of that sort. Racooon (talk) 14:11, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
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Should author's political viewpoint be mentioned?
[edit]After correcting a bad link (new link [1]) I noticed that the author was a frequent contributor to "The Nation" [2] which endorsed Bernie Sanders. It seems fair to characterize the "The Nation" as "liberal" and an excerpt from one review of Blackwater indicates the book may have a "liberal agenda":
Before discussing the main themes of Blackwater, one important, initial point requires mention. Although Blackwater is a well-researched book, it is not a scholarly work but a polemic, through and through. And while the book is often entertaining, it is also frequently annoying in tone and rhetoric. “Blackwater is a private army,” Scahill tells us breathlessly, “and it is controlled by one person: Erik Prince, a radical right-wing Christian mega-millionaire who has served as a major bankroller not only of President Bush’s campaigns but of the broader Christian-right agenda” (p. 55). These common, over-the-top utterances regrettably make substantial portions of the book unreadable [3]
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