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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:15, 26 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:15, 26 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs, external links fine.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • the deterioration of the English position in Flanders What does this refer to?
Rephrased to, hopefully, be clearer.
  • Philip IV relied on his powerful navy typo?
Fixed. (Took me ages to spot it! I'm impressed that you did.
  • Hyphenate: last minute repairs
Done.
  • executed by the French king. The English discovered a proclamation from the French king too close in conjunction
Better?
  • They then turned north and a month after the capture of Caen the English won the Battle of Blanchetaque Missing some commas
D'oh!. Fixed.
Hi Sturmvogel 66, you are clearly a glutton for punishment. Points above all addressed. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:42, 21 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]