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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sahara4u (talk · contribs) 05:49, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

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  • Any image for the lede?
  • Trinidadian former cricketer → former Trinidadian cricketer?
  • ...which left with him with highest Test batting average in history. → no need of the 1st "with"
  • You may mention the New Zealander Rodney Redmond somewhere in the article
  • Link batting

Early life

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  • ...as they had already had a chance to get... "had" is redundant

Test match call-up

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  • ...England cricket team toured the West Indies.... Link both England cricket team and West Indies
  • ...an injury to one of the West Indies' opening batsmen.... You may mention the player name here
  • ...but when West Indies batted.... "the" before West Indies. There may other check 'em out.
  • Link bowling and captain
  • 24-man .... 24-men?

Later career

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  • I think you should link the teams in each section at their first use.
  • ....scored 800 runs at an average of 27.58,[6] → full-stop instead of comma
  • He passed fifty in seven innings, with a top-score of 92 against Glamorgan,[4], but Norman Preston, the editor of Wisden Cricketers' Almanack, suggested neither Ganteaume, nor any of the other three specialist opening batsmen in the team, never "came up to expectations", forcing Frank Worrell to open the batting.[7] → Too many commas, you may rephrase the sentence, also there are 2 commas after Glamorgan.
  • ...and the fourth oldest in the world.[12] → You may mention 3 other names by adding a note.

Final review

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a: b:
  7. Result: Good work, promoted to GA status. Zia Khan 12:41, 10 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    Pass/Fail: