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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:21, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "#2515" not hash for number.
  • You seem to be repeating the "New York Curb Exchange" methodology twice in the lead.
  • "enlarged in 1929–1931" as before, maybe "between 1929 and 1931"?
    • Done.
  • "The New York Curb Exchange became the American Stock Exchange, which moved " mildly confused. Which "which" do you mean?
  • "NRHP reference #" etc in the infobox, I think I brought this up before, it should be changed to comply with MOS.
  • "five 3-story-tall " three.
    • Done.
  • "The words "New York Curb Market" " vs "letters american stock exchange" format very different.
    • Fixed.
  • "(16,882.8 m2)". pretty sure the .8 isn't necessary!
  • Ditto for other such conversions.
  • "the New York Stock Exchange was" you already abbreviated it.
    • Fixed.
  • "$1.6 million." inflate?
    • Done.
  • " was about halfway done" doesn't feel encyclopedic in tone.
    • Fixed.
  • "June 2012.[69][3] T" order.
    • Fixed.
  • Ref 70, spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.

That's all I have on a quick pass. On hold, but pretty much way beyond GA standards already. Good stuff. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 21:36, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

All good, I'll pass. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:19, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]