Talk:American Stock Exchange Building/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:21, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"#2515" not hash for number.
- After our previous discussion, this is being discussed at Template talk:Infobox NRHP. epicgenius (talk) 22:06, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
You seem to be repeating the "New York Curb Exchange" methodology twice in the lead.
- Well, this was previously known as the New York Curb Exchange Building, because that was the former name of the American Stock Exchange. epicgenius (talk) 22:06, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"enlarged in 1929–1931" as before, maybe "between 1929 and 1931"?
- Done.
"The New York Curb Exchange became the American Stock Exchange, which moved " mildly confused. Which "which" do you mean?
- Clarified - it was American Stock Exchange that moved. epicgenius (talk) 22:06, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"NRHP reference #" etc in the infobox, I think I brought this up before, it should be changed to comply with MOS.
- Also mentioned above. epicgenius (talk) 22:06, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"five 3-story-tall " three.
- Done.
"The words "New York Curb Market" " vs "letters american stock exchange" format very different.
- Fixed.
"(16,882.8 m2)". pretty sure the .8 isn't necessary!
Ditto for other such conversions.
- Not sure why that happened - now fixed. epicgenius (talk) 22:06, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"the New York Stock Exchange was" you already abbreviated it.
- Fixed.
"$1.6 million." inflate?
- Done.
" was about halfway done" doesn't feel encyclopedic in tone.
- Fixed.
"June 2012.[69][3] T" order.
- Fixed.
Ref 70, spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.
- Removed, as it's not part of the title. epicgenius (talk) 22:06, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have on a quick pass. On hold, but pretty much way beyond GA standards already. Good stuff. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 21:36, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks. I have done all of these. epicgenius (talk) 22:06, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

All good, I'll pass. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:19, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]