Talk:Akwasi Yeboah/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:13, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Think you also want to state Chigwell is a suburb in London as stated by Newsday
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"His physical education teacher let him know he was not competitive," - how about told him to better pass WP:LIMITED
- OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The acryonms of the National Basketball League should be put in parentheses after the first full mention of it
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink points and rebounds to their respective articles for non-Basketball readers
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"and had 19 points in a 12-point" - scored
- OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"the 2015 National Basketball League’s Division I Playoff Championship." - NBL
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink NCAA Division I
- OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink the term redshirted
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"as Yeboah sat out due to lack of projected playing time." - I believe it would help to know what exactly Yeboah sat out. The entire tournament or the championship game?
- He sat out the season. Clarified. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"He scored 21 points and had 16 rebounds in the first round of the America East Tournament against Binghamton." - This sentence is lacking a reliable source to verify it. Please address this issue
- It was sourced to the next ref, but I added a new one. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Yeboah averaged 16.7 points and 7.7 rebounds per game as a junior for the Seawolves while shooting 41.3 percent from the floor and 31.6 percent from 3-point range." - not mentioned in the America East source. Please find another source that explicitly states this information
- Good catch. I added a ref. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"and first winning season since 2006." - and its
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"including a three pointer to tie the game at 72" - three-pointer
- OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"in a 75-72 win against Nebraska on January 26, 2020" - the hyphen should be replaced by an en dash (–) per MOS:DASH
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"and surpassed the 1,500 point milestone." - 1,500-point
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink assists to the relevant article for non-Basketball readers
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Be consistent in how you write the dates in the references
- Fixed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 9 is missing the date it was published and mention of the Associated Press as the agency who provided USA Today with the story
- Added. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 13's author is incorrect and the date it was published is missing
- Good catch. Fixed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am placing the review on hold to give the nominator the opportunity to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 19:28, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]